

The two above drawings were created first, as a ten minute study and finally a 50 minute drawing. The drawing on the left represents the 10 minute interval while the one on the right represents the 50.
The ten minute study has a few notable flaws. The torso itself is obviously too long and accounts for far too much of the body mass. Rather, it should be relatively foreshortened as the figure is turned away from the viewer. The hips are also not oriented correctly. They are represented completely in profile while they would otherwise be seen at some sort of angle. The discrepancy in the hips causes the legs to be sized disproportionately which creates the illusion of a hovering figure, rather than a seated one. The lineweights are somewhat haphazard and there are altogether too many lines to begin with. However, the structures of the rib cage and pelvis are apparent though their proportions and relation to one another are also a little skewed. These inherent problems were rooted in the long axis drawing. Having drawn the spinal curve too long, it created a negative relationship among the rest of the parts. The musculature surrounding the skeletal frame is representative with extra detail payed to the definition of the triceps and calves. The shoulder blade is also a visible peak in the subjects back and the pectoral muscles can be seen curling underneath the crook of the arm. Compositionally, the work is simple. The subject is centrally located and involves most of the picture plan with no cropping or excess of negative space.
The second, but first 50 minute drawing is much more well accomplished than the first. The proportions represented in this model are far more representative of the human form. The structure of the rib cage is very evident and it involves the musculature arround it accurately. Though the pelvis has been erased almost to the point of non-existance, it's influence upon the muscular region surrounding that area is evident. The gesture is also clearly defined with the figure leaning away from the viewer and resting his head upon his hand with arms crossed. The definition of the calf muscle is again evident but the muscle groups studied in class are relatively lacking with a simple amorphous outline designating the volume of the overall form. Again, the linework lends little to perspective or distinguishing one form or plane from the next. Clearly, this is an area in my drawing that needs development. The angle of the pelvis is slightly flat which caused confusion when trying to draw the second leg receding into the background. Other than that consideration, the rest of the drawing seems well accomplished. Compositionally, again, the figure occupys sufficient space and remians entirely within the picture plane.